My angel / My devil
oringinal poem :
My angel is the one who looks over me
My angel is the one who cares about me
My angel who has beautiful blue eyes
My angel has brown hair
My angel will be there to hold me
My angel keeps me warm
My angel is the one who is always on my mind
My angel is the love of my life
My angel is the one in my dreams
My angel has soft kissable lips
My angel will catch me when I fall
My angel will make me smile when no one else can
My angel will love me for who I am
My angel will be there until the end of time
He is the angel god gave me
My poem :
My devil is the one who looks up at me
My devil is the one that glares at me
My devil has evil red eyes
My devil has big horns
My devil will never be there for me
My devil gives me the shivers
My devil is the one I can't get out of my mind
My devil is the scare of my life
My devil is the one in my nightmares
My devil has sharp dirty teeth
My devil won't catch me when I fall
My devil will make me mad when I'm in a good mood
My devil will never love me
My devil won't always be there and will just leave
He is the devil I never wanted
- This poem was a Model Poem. All I did was the opposite of the original poem.
This is a good poem and very creative doing the opposite of the original poem. -Allan
ReplyDeleteHello maddie, thats a good poem and it makes sense even when you write the opposite. Good job!!! Mouad
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did one about an angel and one about a devil. I also like how you described the actions of what one does, but the other doesn't. Ex: My angel will catch me when I fall
ReplyDeleteMy devil won't catch me when I fall.