Thursday, 19 January 2012

Fire

The fire crackles in the night illumenating the sky.
A beautiful dancing art, the flames flicker away as the night turns to day.
The flame is put to slumber all that remains is it's sinders.


-This poem is a concrete poem. I chose to do ''fire'' because at my cottage that's my favourite thing to do while I'm up there.

2 comments:

  1. it's very well written! really original.

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  2. this poem came out very nice with a little help

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