Sunday, 22 January 2012

Him <3

With each of his words i fall deeper
I tripped, I fell for you
I love every little thing about him, he's a keeper
He's my love, my life, my boo
I tripped I fell for you
Honestly, there's nothing I could have ever done
He's my love, my life, my boo
He'll always be my only one
Honestly, there's nothing I could have ever done
Can't stop me from falling inlove
He'll always be my only one
Out of everyone, I hold him above
Can't stop me from falling inlove
I love every little thing about him, he's a keeper
Out of everyone I hold him above
With each of his words I fall deeper



- This poem was a pantoum.  I wrote this poem because I really wanted to write a cute poem. Also it was about a certain guy.

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6 comments:

  1. Cali23 January 2012 at 18:11

    This is really good, Maddie!!

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  2. Nicole B.24 January 2012 at 06:21

    It's really sincere. It sounds like it came from the heart.

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  3. Marianna's Poetry24 January 2012 at 06:22

    wow! i think this is your best piece of writing maddie! the only problem though is that in love is two words not one. BUT ... I still love it!! :)

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    1. HarmsMomoC25 January 2012 at 05:12

      SO deep, i love how i can relate to it too <3 good job mads <3

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  4. amy.bishop26 January 2012 at 15:58

    Very cute and very relatable ! especially like the line that was "i tripped and fell for you" because of your play on words.

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  5. jason m28 January 2012 at 11:25

    This poem is very well written and very deep. Great job Maddie :)

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